Peachybunny16
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It looks wonderful! The time and dedication, hope to see this in the future maps ![Smile :) :)](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
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Thank you so much for taking time to give such a detailed review on the map. As I have been flying around it the past few days; I can't help but agree with more than one of the things you pointed out as negatives. I have already changed a few i.e. cars on roads and lily pad pathways~ however I need to go ahead and fix the road division; I agree completely that it would make the roads look overall more appealing.Okay so I downloaded the map and had a look around. This what I have found.
For the majority this map is well build map, but as with every map it can be improved. So here are the positives and negatives.
Positives
Negatives
- The golf course, the way you did this with the carpet is extremely good and it was my favorite part of the map.
- The layout, this map is very well laid out. It has certain points around the map that are well distinguished and could be useful in a PvP situation.
- The builds, for the most part they well represent a country club and are strong builds.
- The PvP aspect looks great, it has the feel of maps such as SG4 and Vallyside.
- The terraforming is very good, nice variation and your custom trees are well done.
I hope this helps, I voted no at the moment but if the above were fixed I would love to see this map on the servers.
- The main negative has to be the roads around the map, they are really lacking detail. Maybe add some white wool to show a center line because as of now it looks really plain.
- Also a bit of a continuation on the last point, maybe add some vehicles in the car parks/ roads. Maybe a gold buggie or something would give a nice touch. Maybe a few cars/ buses.
- Another thing but this is more personal preference, I do not really like the podiums. But once again that is more of a personal thing.
- The last bit of criticism is maybe some of the lakes could use some Lilly pads as this would help running away etc.
Overall a very well build map that just needs that small touch up, good job![]()