SURVIVAL GAMES Par 72

[Peachybunny16]

It looks wonderful! The time and dedication, hope to see this in the future maps

 

[Triple]

wao sxc

 

[FierceShadow]

Would love to see this!
Love this map, Haley you have outdone your self If this map doesn't get accepted then I don't know what will.

 

[GoldenChampion]

I love it! <333

 

[Eskild]

Looking pretty sweet, not gonna lie

 

[Tal_Pal]

after seeing this map in its entirety, I must say that this would make a good pvp map, not to mention that the map itself looks equally as good (That's not because I helped either). The server manager must have done an amazing job getting things set up and stuff, bonus points to him also special thanks to the server owner (stephaniemarie27) for letting Haley use her server <3

 

[LeKronix]

YES YES YES!

 

[FlubbyPandaz28]

Looks amazing, this has got to get added. I just like the whole idea of the gold course and it looks extremely nice.
+1

 

[Sean]

Okay so I downloaded the map and had a look around. This what I have found.

For the majority this map is well build map, but as with every map it can be improved. So here are the positives and negatives.

Positives

• The golf course, the way you did this with the carpet is extremely good and it was my favorite part of the map.
• The layout, this map is very well laid out. It has certain points around the map that are well distinguished and could be useful in a PvP situation.
• The builds, for the most part they well represent a country club and are strong builds.
• The PvP aspect looks great, it has the feel of maps such as SG4 and Vallyside.
• The terraforming is very good, nice variation and your custom trees are well done.

Negatives

• The main negative has to be the roads around the map, they are really lacking detail. Maybe add some white wool to show a center line because as of now it looks really plain.
• Also a bit of a continuation on the last point, maybe add some vehicles in the car parks/ roads. Maybe a gold buggie or something would give a nice touch. Maybe a few cars/ buses.
• Another thing but this is more personal preference, I do not really like the podiums. But once again that is more of a personal thing.
• The last bit of criticism is maybe some of the lakes could use some Lilly pads as this would help running away etc.

I hope this helps, I voted no at the moment but if the above were fixed I would love to see this map on the servers.
Overall a very well build map that just needs that small touch up, good job

 

[Nafan | MountinJew]

i liek evryting

 

[Lemonz87]

Okay so I downloaded the map and had a look around. This what I have found.

For the majority this map is well build map, but as with every map it can be improved. So here are the positives and negatives.

Positives

• The golf course, the way you did this with the carpet is extremely good and it was my favorite part of the map.
• The layout, this map is very well laid out. It has certain points around the map that are well distinguished and could be useful in a PvP situation.
• The builds, for the most part they well represent a country club and are strong builds.
• The PvP aspect looks great, it has the feel of maps such as SG4 and Vallyside.
• The terraforming is very good, nice variation and your custom trees are well done.

Negatives

• The main negative has to be the roads around the map, they are really lacking detail. Maybe add some white wool to show a center line because as of now it looks really plain.
• Also a bit of a continuation on the last point, maybe add some vehicles in the car parks/ roads. Maybe a gold buggie or something would give a nice touch. Maybe a few cars/ buses.
• Another thing but this is more personal preference, I do not really like the podiums. But once again that is more of a personal thing.
• The last bit of criticism is maybe some of the lakes could use some Lilly pads as this would help running away etc.

I hope this helps, I voted no at the moment but if the above were fixed I would love to see this map on the servers.
Overall a very well build map that just needs that small touch up, good job

Thank you so much for taking time to give such a detailed review on the map. As I have been flying around it the past few days; I can't help but agree with more than one of the things you pointed out as negatives. I have already changed a few i.e. cars on roads and lily pad pathways~ however I need to go ahead and fix the road division; I agree completely that it would make the roads look overall more appealing.

Thanks once again Sean~ hopefully when you check back in the next day or so I will be able to have a new map download and have the map Sean approved.

EDIT: Consider things fixed.

[/] Road division
[/] Vehicles on roads/In parking lots
[/] Lily pads

As for pedestals~ builder preference like you said...

Tal will back up the server tonight~ for now here are some screenshots showing changes:
http://imgur.com/ib8WATj,63u6Lz6#1

 

[ChargedPVP]

*looks at map* *looks at dog* *hugs dog* It awesome!