Here's my feedback,
Your map is bland and extremely simple. The lack of terraforming is apparent across the entire map and really takes away from the appearance. The randomization of blocks looks worldedited, as though you didn't have time to even use a simple scatter brush. I think this map needs a lot more work, or a complete redesign, if it plans on being accepted to MCSG. Your inability to act maturely and take criticism disgusts me and to be honest, this looks like a vain attempt to get VIP. Not an actual attempt at creating a well thought-out, pvp friendly, and overall beautiful map.
Thanks, but no thanks,
Ben/SpaghettiSquid