[COMPLETED] Deception Valley - By Team Xonia

[Pixelatorx2]

I'll try to download it and review it tomorrow if I have time

Beware, LOTS of leaves will decay

 

[Tree_TheBigKind]

Beware, LOTS of leaves will decay

It's ok :3 I understand the problem with that :3 Just select the map and replace 18 with 18:4 and the leaves won't ever decay

 

[Halo_0]

I like the builds but I think the ground seems and looks a bit empty and plain. Also, its kind of hard to tell what is going on without reading the story. 8/10

 

[Cubes]

I like the builds but I think the ground seems and looks a bit empty and plain. Also, its kind of hard to tell what is going on without reading the story. 8/10

And that's why you download the map! :3
Hope you enjoy, and thanks for the feedback.

 

[Thapple_]

I like it... I like it... I like it...

 

[Cubes]

I like it... I like it... I like it...

I like that you like it. :3

 

[Knaala]

It looks fun

 

[Halo_0]

And that's why you download the map! :3
Hope you enjoy, and thanks for the feedback.

I did download the map... That is the only way I review...

 

[TheOfficialWils]

TheOfficialWils' official review no. 1
(This is my first map to do a full review on, lucky you )

Good:

• The map looks as if it will have good pvp. It has a nice mix of terrain to pvp on which is good because although people claim that pvp is best on flat land it just isn't true; flat land is just the easiest place to pvp and therefore less tactical.
• The builds are nice, they have a good style and are well built.
• Nice little secrets interspersed around the map.
• The redstoning is nice with some clever contraptions and some cool ideas.

Bad:

• My main problem with the map is the terraforming, it's not great to be honest. The giant tree looks wierd and ugly no where near the quality of the trees in sg3, wyvern's wake and other maps. In many of the places which are high up around the edge of the map you can see the flatland outside the dome. The terraforming in the map itself is a bit dull really nothing exciting going on.
• The ground in the town is a bit plain. It would be nice if it was filled out a bit more.

Other:

• I didn't find much redstoning but it's meant to be hidden so thats fine. I'm just saying this because it's why I am not reviewing it.
• On the airship with the hot tub you can get stuck behind the hot tub.

Score:

7.1/10

It would have been higher but I feel like the terraforming let you down. I like the map and with improvements it could be great!

 

[Pixelatorx2]

I didn't find much redstoning but it's meant to be hidden so thats fine. I'm just saying this because it's why I am not reviewing it.

• On the airship with the hot tub you can get stuck behind the hot tub.

Score:

6.8/10

It would have been higher but I feel like the terraforming let you down. I like the map and with improvements it could be great!

I will personally tour you the map showing you the redstone, me and @GotCubes worked out butts off making some of the things

 

[TheOfficialWils]

I will personally tour you the map showing you the redstone, me and @GotCubes worked out butts off making some of the things

That sounds great I'll edit my review when I have seen it.

 

[Pixelatorx2]

That sounds great I'll edit my review when I have seen it.

If you can get a server and upload the map gg I will.


Worse case sonario I tour you on the server, after I ask spice