SkylineCity (WIP)

[MrChicken1337]

Hey! Me and my friend are making a new map again but this is better then all the other!
This is the players: MrChicken1337 and miltonanderson.
Some screenshots:

Its only on 20% so far!

 

[Crackling]

First of all, I think the map looks very boring and none of the screenshots give me the "wow-feeling". The terrain is too flat, yes that is good for pvp, but there needs to be some challenge and there needs to be something pretty to look at. There seems to be too much terrain without any detail, simple areas without anything but grass and dirt is not pretty to look at at all, there should always be something, trees (not too many), buildings, water (neither too much), maybe add some mountains or anything to just fill out a bit more.

The buildings look very simple, there is nothing original to them, usually they are just square-houses made out of the normal blocks with some glass here and there.

Also, I suggest you to never add the dome before the map is completely finished as it may make terraforming hard, and trust me, smoothing out terrain close to the dome is going to mess up everything.

Anyway, good luck, be original

 

[MrChicken1337]

First of all, I think the map looks very boring and none of the screenshots give me the "wow-feeling". The terrain is too flat, yes that is good for pvp, but there needs to be some challenge and there needs to be something pretty to look at. There seems to be too much terrain without any detail, simple areas without anything but grass and dirt is not pretty to look at at all, there should always be something, trees (not too many), buildings, water (neither too much), maybe add some mountains or anything to just fill out a bit more.

The buildings look very simple, there is nothing original to them, usually they are just square-houses made out of the normal blocks with some glass here and there.

Also, I suggest you to never add the dome before the map is completely finished as it may make terraforming hard, and trust me, smoothing out terrain close to the dome is going to mess up everything.

Anyway, good luck, be original

Okay

 

[Lively]

The builds are poor, with lack of detail or creativity, and I see little to no terraforming.

 

[vascopasco]

Euhm it looks really empty!

 

[luigiriot]

You repeated a bunch of your photos.

Also, it looks very boring.
Get some more creative looking buildings, terraform the map to have some caves and hills, make some secret areas.

You did say it is a WIP, so I won't be too harsh because maybe you just recently started, but it really needs a lot more "umph!" in it's kick

 

[TotalDramaTony]

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