Did i do good at all on my first avatar???Any tips?

[Otto]

Nice with the lighting, but the body is 2d and the arms are 3d...

 

[iJUDG3R]

7-10 looks cool

 

[JokersMaze]

The character should be the focus of the avatar- try making the rectangle smaller or the character bigger. Add some extra shading to give it depth. A real pose would be nice too, preferably an action. The current pose looks awkward.

 

[haz908]

8/10 love ur avatar keep up the EPIC WORK random guy!