The map looks great! But the one thing I worry about and you should too is that the lag it may cause. Many of these big maps with cities e.g Futuristic City, Icarus etc are hated by players that have slow PC's and/or internet because the cities cause
excessive lag. I like the look of the map and the story surrounding it and everything...but me and probably many other having a slow PC may not be able to play the map.
You guys should try to do something to make it as less laggy as possible. Like under spawn don't put any block or just put water so that it is easier to render for people with slow computers. Even people with fast PC's will lag. Gotta have all these things into consideration
. But don't mind me its just a suggestion