PokeJosh
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- Joined
- Jun 17, 2013
- Messages
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All of this criticism comforts me more than you know. Because I haven't actually done the chest placement yet, I've just put a lot in places that I couldn't resist. And the water area is a lot more interesting now! New download coming up! Thanks for downloading, the map is in the final stages of building, and after that, changes will most likely be purely from feedback like yours.I've been waiting for this download for ages. After having a good look through the map, here's my feedback:
Amazing terraforming and there is a wide variety of blocks used, but they're also used in a way that it adds to the map, instead of just for the hell of it. A plentiful amount of structures relating to the topic, and adding in challenges along the way. (Like the food tornado and donut parkour.) Original idea, not too much water, but there could probably be more donuts, or it be more distributed around the map instead of in one big cluster. My only major downside for now is the chest placement, you need to make more obvious chests and I haven't been able to find many obvious chests, but there seems to be lots of hidden ones. (Tornado parkour, the fridge, etc.)
Overall map grade: A-
EDIT: New info!
Unofficial changelog:
-changed strawberry to mushroom blocks
-added smaller strawberries
-more fruit in fruit bowl
-fruit parkour in the east fruit palace spire (unfinished)
-falling challenge in west fruit palace spire
-cobblestone block distribution outside fruit bowl
-"pretty sandstone" block distribution on desserted island
-added liquorish bridge
-added gummi bear tower
-added floating jelly beans (@lakerfuffle )
-lava sauce in shrimp glass
-LOTS MORE TREES in health food forest
-added beach along health food forest
-added "beet" palm trees
-added celery logs
-"there's a leek in the forest!"
-added ruins to health food forest
-added ice cream sandwiches! (popsicles are planned)
-added microwave construction (crates and crane)
-more redstone!
-minor detailing, still a very incomplete map
-more things
Cobblestone distribution
Jelly Beans!
Liquorish and Gummi Bear Tower!
Crates! Crane! Building things! (it's a microwave)
Added lava sauce!
Strawberry looks so much more delicious now!
New download up most likely tomorrow, you should really download the map and let me know what's wrong with me!