Boboaluitz
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Alright, thanks.
It looks good so far, here are my criticisms:
The stairs in the flooring design, are they there to make the floor look cracked? If not, they do not really appeal to my eyes, as they seem to be a bit random, not truly a design.
The sports fields are... unnatural and sloppy looking, especially the baseball diamond. Try using things other than wool for these things, as wool doesn't quite blend with natural blocks. This applies slightly to the parking lot, where I think smooth stone would be more appropriate, though this is more of your opinion.
[EDIT]...is this the same map? I want to see the corn
It looks good so far, here are my criticisms:
The stairs in the flooring design, are they there to make the floor look cracked? If not, they do not really appeal to my eyes, as they seem to be a bit random, not truly a design.
The sports fields are... unnatural and sloppy looking, especially the baseball diamond. Try using things other than wool for these things, as wool doesn't quite blend with natural blocks. This applies slightly to the parking lot, where I think smooth stone would be more appropriate, though this is more of your opinion.
[EDIT]...is this the same map? I want to see the corn