Survival Games "Make a lobby contest" Submission

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wrong section moved

lol, iv done that before.

 

[Nadarekyle]

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Looks nice! Still a bit small, but it's not too bad. You know you can add these to the main post with "Edit".

 

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Looks nice! Still a bit small, but it's not too bad. You know you can add these to the main post with "Edit".

i am terrible with these websites.

 

[darkai202]

Me gusta.

 

[Lechips11]

I suggest taking Nadarekyle's advice, the main room does look a little too small. There are some really inventive ideas here however; those hanging lights are a great addition, and the ores really give the 'cave' feel towards the lobby. I actually don't have a lot to say... add more? It looks a little small and bland, so a water pool or something could help liven the area up. Hanging vines off sides of the walls? Not much though. To be honest, I don't really know what could work with your theme.

I suggest improving that water fountain. Add half-slabs, stairs, a new water flow design, anything to make it look less dull. Otherwise, I'd appreciate it if you didn't advertise your lobby on other people's submissions. It's quite rude.

Anyway, one of the better lobbies, but as I'm a perfectionist, it still has a pretty long way to go before it could be added.

These are the times when I want more than one lobby.

 

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I suggest taking Nadarekyle's advice, the main room does look a little too small. There are some really inventive ideas here however; those hanging lights are a great addition, and the ores really give the 'cave' feel towards the lobby. I actually don't have a lot to say... add more? It looks a little small and bland, so a water pool or something could help liven the area up. Hanging vines off sides of the walls? Not much though. To be honest, I don't really know what could work with your theme.

I suggest improving that water fountain. Add half-slabs, stairs, a new water flow design, anything to make it look less dull. Otherwise, I'd appreciate it if you didn't advertise your lobby on other people's submissions. It's quite rude.

Anyway, one of the better lobbies, but as I'm a perfectionist, it still has a pretty long way to go before it could be added.

These are the times when I want more than one lobby.

Thank you so much i love this feed-back, and sorry about the add on your thread nadar, i thought i was on the main page and posted it, i am going to take that down. also, this map acctualy isnt underground, i just made a realy large rectangular prisim that isnt as wide as you would expect(the cave i desighned in mc-edit is 3 times longer than the acctual lobby...oops) so making it wider is preety difficult by hand but im trying my best. that said i do need to widen the area around the fountain and make that larger because it realy does look boring compared to others. I have alot to do today but ill try fitting lobby-building in. once again thaks for the feed back!

 

[zipp303]

necro looks good

 

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Locking because EXTREMELY OLD THREAD.