My first Machinima? Yay or Nay?

[Kikoo]

Well I come to this forum because you guys know me the best and I know you the best. So what do you think it was my first try of making one. So? Is it good or bad.

You guys helped me once before. Hope you can help again.

 

[Poppi11]

hmm I like it, maybe get a better mic

 

[Kikoo]

hmmm ok

 

[TheMinecraftPerson]

well, it was okay...
What's with the voice? it's like a robot programed to have "emotion" in its voice- meaning, the dialouge had the same ups and downs over and over again.

other than that, i guess the concept was pretty good...

and 4 hours isn't that long.

 

[Kikoo]

It was supposed to be retarded voice of bear grylls I made it that way on purpose. and 4 hours is alot. lol

It was my first try so I guess I can get off the hook.

 

[haakonfj]

I like it
i liked the retarded voiced bear grylls, and when the black box with text on it came up

tho i didn't like the dialog between Herobrine and Slender that was kinda odd
other than that good!

 

[Kikoo]

really? haha I thought the dialogue between slender and herobrine was heaps funny.

 

[Ikubi]

Kikoo, master of emotions. I kid!
This was very good, the only thing that bugged me though is that the same joke is used over and Over and OVER. It really gets old after a while.

 

[Hystericallify]

Ga.... Yay!

 

[Kikoo]

Kikoo, master of emotions. I kid!
This was very good, the only thing that bugged me though is that the same joke is used over and Over and OVER. It really gets old after a while.

Ok will take into acount

 

[RedSeamonster]

I enjoyed it the only thing that bothered me was the voice going up and down like pLAne. I don't think he actually talks like that......but then again I haven't seen a Man vs. Wild episode for a while. Overall though, nice job.

 

[Kikoo]

I enjoyed it the only thing that bothered me was the voice going up and down like pLAne. I don't think he actually talks like that......but then again I haven't seen a Man vs. Wild episode for a while. Overall though, nice job.

Yeah I admit I need a better mic then this shitty inbuilt one lol. And bear grylls was supposed to sound retarded to make it more funny, but If thats how you feel I will take that into acount

Kikoo, master of emotions. I kid!
This was very good, the only thing that bugged me though is that the same joke is used over and Over and OVER. It really gets old after a while.

Wait A second You mean the music was overused.