Hey, I think, I have a nice idea for the ending. So, everyone dies (the goods) and the dragon lives. Except, for one hider. He stood back watching the others, very scared. And the dragon roars at the hider, and the hider starts running, and Idk how, but the hider should kill the dragon. So the Nord, and everyone else dies, but the hider lives. Then maybe a short 30s - 1 m scene in like heaven? XD And Nord says like he doesnt care that he died, he just cares that he avenged his family by getting the dragon killed.
You don't have to, I just think this will get a bigger audience, and will actually make your move a lot better. I might join it, not sure yet thouhg,