My First Avatar

[hobo1955]

so I made my first avatar the today (yayz).
I plan to make money out of them in the future , if they are up to standard , so I'm looking for feedback. I am just an amateur at tablet-drawing and I'm using a free app to make it so obviously it will lack in tools needed. I love art and I am 100x better using good'ol pencil and paper but while I was in NewYork I bought a cool touchscreen pen designed for art with multiple nibs so I decided I'd give it a go. 20 bucks later I was already practicing and heres what I finally came up with
Tell me what I should improve on and if it is good!

 

[duckluv321]

Looks nice although I'd remove the random lines on the arms and such. I really don't have the 'authority' to give criticism since my art is still sub-par, so ask TheUnchainedArtist for some tips if you'd like tips

 

[hobo1955]

I will make you one just for a test

 

[Chezerony]

Looks nice although I'd remove the random lines on the arms and such. I really don't have the 'authority' to give criticism since my art is still sub-par, so ask TheUnchainedArtist for some tips if you'd like tips

or me, perhaps?

justkiddingpleasedon'tputmeonthespot

 

[duckluv321]

or me, perhaps?

justkiddingpleasedon'tputmeonthespot

Ask Chezerony. Quick, put him on the spot

 

[ARB1T3R]

Looks cool! I like it!
But When you get a program like photoshop or Gimp (which is free) there are better ways to do shading.
And maybe draw a cool background XD