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Velgoria [Trailer Soon]

Would you want this map on MCSG?

  • Yes

    Votes: 75 91.5%
  • No

    Votes: 8 9.8%

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Apfi

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Story: Once upon a time, there were three kings, who all had a name. First, King Jax, the king who always liked to be nice and was really protective, that is why he is the only king who built walls around his castle. Next, we have King Mizor, he was also one of the nicer kings in this state of time, his people meant so much to him, therefore he has the biggest castle and village. Lastly, we have King Maco, the evil king, who went after and attacked everything and anything he saw that was alive. He is indeed the one who forged war on the Kingdom of Velgoria. That is why King Maco has lava around his castle. Throughout this land of Velgoria there were many fights and people have created different structures, they camped in wood, fought in water, they did anything to survive the battle of Velgoria.

Pictures:

The Cornicopia
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King Jax's Castle
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King Mizor's Castle
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King Maco's Castle
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The Windmill
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The Pirate Ship Battle
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The "Big" Tree
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The Barn
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The Campsite
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The Marketplace
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TRAILER (thanks Cscoop):
Hope you guys like it! :)
BUILT BY: Zuxt and tpemrickjr.
 

Spidey3000

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Nice work! Just a few comments-

-A teeny bit more terraforming? Too smooth, but that's just me.

-Maybe you shouldn't reveal where traps are. Build them again in super flat, then post the screenshot.

Overall, I love it!
 

zukodark

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As I said on the other post, Maco's castle is a copy of the one Madness64 makes on the tutorial. That farm looks like something you use on minecraft, you should make it look like a REAL farm. That in my opinion would make it a lot better, as things like the armies tips about real world, and not about what is practical in minecraft. Real farms don't have water streams straight across in them. As you copied Madness64's castle, you should have seen his "Talkin 'bout" on realistic farms.
 

Apfi

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Nice work! Just a few comments-

-A teeny bit more terraforming? Too smooth, but that's just me.

-Maybe you shouldn't reveal where traps are. Build them again in super flat, then post the screenshot.

Overall, I love it!
Thanks, and I will try!
 

hobo1955

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The building is poor , except for the castle you got from a tutorial , which doesnt really count as building. ,
The idea and storyline is cool though. A good start for a first map. But seriously , dont use tutorials.
 

Apfi

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The building is poor , except for the castle you got from a tutorial , which doesnt really count as building. ,
The idea and storyline is cool though. A good start for a first map. But seriously , dont use tutorials.
What tutorial is everyone talking about?! Plus, that castle was not even my build.
 

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I'm wondering if Hiqhlights didn't even build that castle now.
 

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