There's just not enough detail
EDIT: I've looked at the revamp, and my comment sticks. It's not up to MCSG standards, along with the fact that the builds seem really random. There's a large sailboat in a very small lake. This makes absolutely no sense. A good start for your building skills, but to be honest I would just can this map altogether and start fresh. You may not want to do this at first, which is fine but if you are serious about getting a map onto the servers this is what your going to need to do. This may seem really harsh you will understand. I went through this exact same process.