Survival Games Map: Tritania

[elcho]

I did a review of this map. The building parts is ok. But it can get better. Needs more details.
The redstone part is a little bit to simple do. Needs to get more advanced.
The terraforming isent that good.It needs more details.
Out of the glass looking like a simple dirt mountin.Could be a lot better,
This seems to be a bad try to VIP.

But 6/10 Bananas.

//Elcho

 

[ianianmense]

Wich buildings need detail then?
And how can we improve the terraforming?

 

[elcho]

Wich buildings need detail then?
And how can we improve the terraforming?

1.The terraforming is a little bit to simple. Like out of the glass its like awful. It needs grass and flowers and more.
And inside its getting like a little bit to boring.Its need more litters.
2.The buildings isent bad,but it can get a lot better.Details. If you for exemple make a garden. Make it full with details. I cant really explain it but. Just a flower pot could be great.The small details do alot.

//Elcho

 

[ianianmense]

1.The terraforming is a little bit to simple. Like out of the glass its like awful. It needs grass and flowers and more.
And inside its getting like a little bit to boring.Its need more litters.
2.The buildings isent bad,but it can get a lot better.Details. If you for exemple make a garden. Make it full with details. I cant really explain it but. Just a flower pot could be great.The small details do alot.

//Elcho

Ty but so far we only made the walls fo the houses.
And about the terraforming: we will try

 

[SonicSplit]

i know terraforming

 

[chockadlad]

wow that was pretty mean...
First of all right now im adding tunnels that go trough the mountains to make traveling easier.
Seccond im going to make the town close to spawn (as i think the other is OK) more detail.
And about that tree, i know the bottom looks weird but since this is a giant bonsai tree the top has spheres of leaves (take a closer look at Bonsly)
But thx for telling us what to do

Giving constructive criticism is mean now?..

 

[ianianmense]

Well its been a while but tovrik and i have decided to finally finish this map. We will try to finish it before 2014

 

[w0wmonkey]

Well its been a while but tovrik and i have decided to finally finish this map. We will try to finish it before 2014

I WANT TO HELP, Talk to me