Please help! New artwork, need your opinion!

[royroyboy]

Hey guys, Graphical Cheese here again and today I thought I would make a pic for my friend (hope he doesn't see this thread but he doesn't even go on here so I should be safe ). But at the same time I thought this would be a good opportunity to try or improve my style, I guess you could call this similar to Gold_Solace's style and if it is then I see that as good because he is just so awesome! ehehh, getting bit off topic, anyway, Please comment anything you see wrong or could be improved on my next line-work (yes I will colour this later) Also tell me if you want me to post the coloured version when its done! That's all for now, here it is:

EDIT: Finished artwork, tell me what I can work on next time (colour wise)

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[Kennyrulez]

All good. The lines are neat there is detail. The only thing I can really think of is if you change the pressure sensitivity on some of the lines.

 

[Creper_face]

I think it's cool's great!

 

[CyphirxusGraphics]

All i can think of is shortening the fold lines on the bent leg, and make the lines for the head thicker to match the body

 

[boboy1999]

Looks good!

 

[TheCrazyCookie]

Wow! I really like it! There's detail and very precise lines! I'd order/request a drawing from you if you had a shop! Do you take requests?

 

[royroyboy]

All good. The lines are neat there is detail. The only thing I can really think of is if you change the pressure sensitivity on some of the lines.

Ok ill work on that! Thanks!

All i can think of is shortening the fold lines on the bent leg, and make the lines for the head thicker to match the body

Ok thanks, ill work on keeping the line sizes more balanced.

Wow! I really like it! There's detail and very precise lines! I'd order/request a drawing from you if you had a shop! Do you take requests?

Yes, I have a shop here's the link: www.cheesegraphics.wix.com/order I used to have a selection for "wallpapers" but no one ordered them, they just got avatars so I got rid of them, but as you can see this is a whole body thing and I want to improve on my "wallpaper" style. they can be used as avatars, like mine.... "wallpapers" is just a name i give them, but yeh.... That's why I'm working on this and hopefully more wallpaper styles so I can get em back in my shop!

 

[royroyboy]

Finished artwork, please tell me what I can do with colouring :3 (that's if you have any suggestions)

 

[OuchTheSchauzer]

Finished artwork, please tell me what I can do with colouring :3 (that's if you have any suggestions)

looks awesome but make it a double rainbow ;D

 

[CyphirxusGraphics]

The rainbow looks good, but it looks like there's shadow cast on each color

 

[royroyboy]

The rainbow looks good, but it looks like there's shadow cast on each color

there is I just did it for fun