Looking for some critiques

[CyphirxusGraphics]

Just looking for some feedback on a request that I'm working on. Mostly for things pertaining to the face and clothing, 'cause those are the things I'm the most unsure about. Any other tips regarding my style is highly appreciated. I plan to clean up and color this later on TwitchTV, so come if you want
**Note, I haven't gotten to finish drawing the hand, I'm absolutely terrible at them >->**

 

[goldlab | |Harv]

Very good, I like how the thicknes of the brush makes the eyes stand out

 

[Kennyrulez]

Not really much to criticise, all the lines are nice and clean. The only thing I can see that could do with something is the neck area but once that's coloured it should be fine. Could I get a link to your twitch Aswell so I can see when you stream some art things?

 

[CyphirxusGraphics]

Not really much to criticise, all the lines are nice and clean. The only thing I can see that could do with something is the neck area but once that's coloured it should be fine. Could I get a link to your twitch Aswell so I can see when you stream some art things?

Yeah I guess the neck lines are a bit out of palce. Gotta look at some more references XP
http://www.twitch.tv/cyphirxus