I Am From -By Justin Case (Poem)

[56justincase]

Hello guys. I made a poem for my English class, and wanted some feedback from all of you's peoples'
Just to let you know this is about me. Not about someone else or directed towards anyone but -=myself=-.
P.S. Read this from your most serious, depressing, and deep emotional tone of voice.

I Am From

I am from the new and never the old
Where a life was lost, and another was started
Where an argument could never be settled
Where things were never the same, and change was always about


I am from the dust
Where being alone never means you’re alone
Where things are always supposed to get better
Where family’s always over, and being self-conscious is never okay


I am from the lonely adventure
Where life is a struggle
Where you need more than confidence, and more than hope
Where people put you down, but you learn how to get back up


I am from the damaged
From the restless and the weak
Where I’m not the only one
Where others are just the same


I am from darkness to the light
Where you are never alone
Where things do get better
Where life is never a struggle
Where confidence, and hope is enough


I am from the New and never the Old…

-Justin


Please feel free to post any feedback. Negatives/Positives, will mean a lot either way.

 

[Joel/MadDawg]

Holy crap that is good. This is incredibly relatable, as I think everyone hopes and believes in a better future than what their past was. I honestly don't see anything to change in it, so it's definitely an A+ in my book

 

[56justincase]

Holy crap that is good. This is incredibly relatable, as I think everyone hopes and believes in a better future than what their past was. I honestly don't see anything to change in it, so it's definitely an A+ in my book

Thank you so much! Means a lot.

 

[Keno]

This was truly a nice read. You seem to be really talented, keep it up C:

 

[Avesu]

That's deep man. I'm no teacher, but this is am A+.