Haiku's

[Mamiamato24]

Hi!

I'm writing some haiku's for school based on League of Legends characters, so I thought I'd post them on here and see what you guys think of them.
Also, feel free to comment your own! I'm really interested to read them, as I'm quite inexperienced when it comes to haiku's, so I'm not sure if I'm doing it right.

Anyway, here we go!

Spectral (Fiddlesticks)

Spot heralding crows
He, the harbinger of doom
Soon approaches us

Retribution (Kalista)

Our spears rend traitors
Turncoats with treasonous hearts
Endless suffering

Automaton (Orianna)

Oh, flesh-bound beings
They fall apart with such ease
So bizarre, they scream

 

[Imanol]

[Akame]

A person by day
A assassin by day
killing and assassinating
is all she could allow.

[Kurome]

She killed for the intent
abandoned by content
never again shall
she live again.

 

[ninjow]

Tragedy, murder
Kidnap, betrayal, torture
What else but Nemo

 

[Mamiamato24]

[Akame]

A person by day
A assassin by day
killing and assassinating
is all she could allow.

[Kurome]

She killed for the intent
abandoned by content
never again shall
she live again.

I thought haiku's followed the 5-7-5 pattern..?

 

[Zombie_1337]

Weaboos... They are everywhere! xD, jk Idc abbout weaboos as long as they don't kill me o.o