Coal Miner's Nightmare [WIP]

[Relixen]

Coal Miner's Nightmare​

Story: The tributes are entered into a recently evacuated coal mine. The tributes have two choices: Stay in the mines or Explore the houses of the miners above.​

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The Cornucopia. The ladder leads to the miner's base, which they spent their days not mining.​

The building of the exit of the ladders from the cornucopia​

The inside of the building shown above​

Another look at the cornucopia​

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Some terrain. (Trying not to be specific, just so I don't ruin the map ^-^)​

Another destroyed building​

A bridge

I know it isn't much, but i'll enjoy your opinions! What do you like in already made maps? What don't you like? What would you like to see? Is what is already made appealing for what the story is? Any other things? Keep in mind I've never made a map, and i'm fairly new to this site. ​

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Change Log​

• added more structures, and more terrain. screenshots added [1/1/13]

 

[Dvjay]

It looks good, I suggest adding some more structures and/or landscape on the outside so it wont look like the middle of nowhere.

 

[Aristotle]

Are you trying to make it solar-frost-esque or make it in a completely different style?

 

[Aristotle]

Either way, it looks really fun already!

 

[Relixen]

I'm trying to interpret the top portion of the map as a concentration camp. Here's picture of a different building

 

[Danielbess]

MOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR detail.

 

[Relixen]

Moar detail to what exactly? The architecture? The terraforming? I would like to know ^-^

 

[Danielbess]

Well, the architecture, the terraforming. Also, it doesn't have that "Survival Games" feel. Try to make the building in the last screenshot you posted use more blocks, since it looks bad *No offence* Keep up the work !

 

[Lululioness]

I think the bigger houses aren't ruined or small enough to be a coal miners house.

 

[TotalDramaTony]

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