Pharoah's Tomb SG

[Tfarce]

Hey guys, I've been super busy building this map lately and i would really appreciate it if you liked it. The pics are in the link to planet minecraft. THIS MAP IS HAND BUILT: NO WORLD EDIT.

http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/pharoahs-tomb-survival-games/

 

[Rhino1928]

Looks nice i guess

 

[fushi]

I like it, but it's too similar to karmunrah...

 

[Tfarce]

I like it, but it's too similar to karmunrah...

Well good sir, that is where you are wrong. It is not AT ALL like Karmunrah because:
1. It is not out doors
2. It is probably more similar to Solar Frost by Eshan if anything
3. The theme of it is the only reason you are probably saying that.

It is also not EVEN close to done I will put more pics up as it improves.
So, if you could give me critizism on certain things I would be more then happy to chang them. Thanks f0r commenting.

 

[Raycu]

I dont really like it.

 

[Tfarce]

Looks nice i guess

Great thanks for commenting!

 

[Tfarce]

I dont really like it.

Please tell me why.

 

[Raycu]

It seams to bland. Not enough depth in the build the paterns are all made of one block and having logs line things never was very beautiful in my opinion. Not to mention other things seam kind of boring or lopsided. Dont get me wrong. Variety in shape is fine. But a lopsided looking corn isn't. I am not even leaving out how the corn looks quiet small and pvp would feel cramped or hard at best. You need to think more about playability and depth with paterns. If you would like to learn more just go on reddit and search up tutorials on building houses. The MC subreddit. It may not have to do with what you are building but those pointers can be helpful and not to mention looking at other peoples builds and seeing how they integrated ice into solar frost you could add in sand and change it out with variety's of sandstone. Thats really what I think.

 

[Tfarce]

It seams to bland. Not enough depth in the build the paterns are all made of one block and having logs line things never was very beautiful in my opinion. Not to mention other things seam kind of boring or lopsided. Dont get me wrong. Variety in shape is fine. But a lopsided looking corn isn't. I am not even leaving out how the corn looks quiet small and pvp would feel cramped or hard at best. You need to think more about playability and depth with paterns. If you would like to learn more just go on reddit and search up tutorials on building houses. The MC subreddit. It may not have to do with what you are building but those pointers can be helpful and not to mention looking at other peoples builds and seeing how they integrated ice into solar frost you could add in sand and change it out with variety's of sandstone. Thats really what I think.

Oh dood you have no idea. This is just the basic structure after I'm completely done I'm going to go over it 3 times and DETAILS and DETAILS and DETAILS. But, yeah fighting is kind of scrunched I understand. That's also so people don't run to nowhere and just keep running forever like on SG 4. That is annoying you must admit. Thank you for the constructive critisism though it really helps.

 

[fushi]

Dude, I didn't meant that offensively...no need to rage :I

 

[Raycu]

#1 petpieve, people assume you are raging without any outside context as to if they really are raging. IE caps exclamation marks and drawn out words.

 

[fushi]

#1 petpieve, people assume you are raging without any outside context as to if they really are raging. IE caps exclamation marks and drawn out words.

Dude, read what he wrote...that was a bit loud, if you know what I mean